#New Poetry Form – Andaree – Beautiful Sunny Day

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#New Poetry Form – Andaree – Beautiful Sunny Day

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Beautiful Sunny Day

Great what a fine sunny day can do to us.
Kids ready waiting for the school bus.
Washing already on the line,
now it’s coffee time.
Text my friend
fine,
now to send.
Pleased it is springtime
had enough of wintertime,
that all, there’s nothing left to discuss
great what a fine sunny day can do to us.

Created by Andrea Dietrich writing on PoetrySoup in Feb, 2015 
It is syllabic, with lines of 11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11 
Rhyme Scheme: AabbcbcbbaA 
It requires a Refrain: Line 1 is repeated as Line 11. 
Generally displayed centered.

Copyright © 2018 Elsie Hagley

9 thoughts on “#New Poetry Form – Andaree – Beautiful Sunny Day

  1. Nice poem form and cheery content – and not to knit pick – but the photo did not seem to really be in sync- with the content – oh – the text part – yes – i get it now and the relax.
    But at first it looked like an sirport delay – ((and maybe winter with cold outside))
    And was expecting a bus or spring time or a sun and blue sky

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    • Thank you for the nice comment, those poems that are centered look pleasing to the eye and I enjoy writing them. This one took only five minutes to write, I had a appointment and didn’t want to miss a day from posting so it was a hurried poem. It could have been better if I had spend more time on it. Now to sort something out for Tuesday Tummy’s. Have a great day.

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