November Notes – Day 5 – Criminal Tanka


November Notes – Day 5 – Criminal Tanka


Criminal Tanka – Inspired by Criminal – Fiona Apple

guidance doing wrong

you are telling the story

true love never dies

feeling like a criminal

will not answer the question

English tanka poetry consists of five units, usually with the following pattern of    5-7-5-7-7 which is syllables.

The answer is peace offering, like the photo above

Posted for the November Notes Challenge hosted by two awesome writers, Rosema at A Reading Writer, and Sarah Doughty at Heartstring Eulogies.


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