November Notes – Day 3 – The Other side of Paradise Tanka

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November Notes – Day 3 – The Other side of Paradise Tanka

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The Other Side Of Paradise TankaInspired by The Other Side Of Paradise  by Glass Animals

lost in brainless love

took to traveling the world

fell for stardom love

never to return again

just like the last day at school

English tanka poetry consists of five units, usually with the following pattern of    5-7-5-7-7 which is syllables.

Posted for the November Notes Challenge hosted by two awesome writers, Rosema at A Reading Writer, and Sarah Doughty at Heartstring Eulogies.

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