November Notes – Day 1 – Almost Lovers


November Notes – Day 1 – Almost Lovers


Unhappy Lovers Tanka- Inspired by Almost Lovers by A Fine Frenzy

slowly drifting by

love meant to stay forever

lost to temptation

never return to traitors

will be your worst enemy

English tanka poetry consists of five units, usually with the following pattern of    5-7-5-7-7 which is syllables.

Posted for the November Notes Challenge hosted by two awesome writers, Rosema at A Reading Writer, and Sarah Doughty at Heartstring Eulogies.


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